Tuesday, February 19, 2008

The Press and Stupid Accusations of Plagiarism

I previously did a blog on plagiarism, a topic whose interest is in proportion to the lack on any agreement on what it means, a lack that has been the case for centuries. Most recently, Hillary Clinton has raised accusations of plagiarism against her opponent Barack Obama. Her defeat in the Wisconsin primary yesterday hopefully will put an end to this tactic, but it may not end publicity about the issue if the press has its way. Here is a link to a column in today’s Washington Post by writer Dana Milbank. I quote only the relevant parts:

In recent days, [Obama] has been exposed as a high-risk borrower, accused of taking everything from Massachusetts Gov. Deval Patrick's "just words" riff on the power of oratory to Bob the Builder's refrain for preschoolers, "Yes, we can!"

And he borrowed anew on Tuesday at an outdoor rally in San Antonio -- this time from former rival John Edwards. Criticizing pharmaceutical companies' ads, Obama joked: "You know those ads where people are running around the fields, you know, they're smiling, you don't know what the drug is for?"

Compare that with this staple of the 2004 Edwards stump speech: "I love the ads. Buy their medicine, take it, and the next day you and your spouse will be skipping through the fields."

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Obama's latest trouble came Saturday when, responding to Clinton's criticism that he is all talk, the candidate borrowed, nearly word for word and without attribution, a favorite passage from Patrick. "Don't tell me words don't matter. 'I have a dream' -- just words. 'We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal' -- just words. 'We have nothing to fear but fear itself' -- just words."

Obama said he should have credited Patrick, but he protested that "the notion that using a line from one of my national campaign co-chairs . . . is somehow objectionable, somehow doesn't make sense,"

Potentially more objectionable are the many lines Obama has lifted from Edwards, whose campaign compiled a list of the offenses before the candidate dropped out of the race.

Here's Obama's announcement speech in February 2007: "I know I haven't spent a lot of time learning the ways of Washington. But I've been there long enough to know that the ways of Washington must change."

Compare that with Edwards's 2003 announcement speech: "I haven't spent most of my life in politics, but I've spent enough time in Washington to know how much we need to change Washington."

Some of the common phrases are too cliched to qualify for lending privileges, but others seem to be more than coincidence. "We need a president not afraid to use the word 'union,' " Edwards told an audience of steelworkers in July 2007. "We need a president . . . who is not afraid to mention unions," Obama said a month later. Edwards, accepting the party's vice presidential nomination in 2004, said, "Hard work should be valued in this country, so we're going to reward work, not just wealth." Obama, in turn, has been heard to say, "We shouldn't just be respecting wealth in this country, we should be respecting work."

[Another] example [was] unearthed Tuesday by ABC's Jake Tapper. Patrick, at the 2006 Massachusetts Democratic convention, said, "I am not asking anybody to take a chance on me; I am asking you to take a chance on your own aspirations." A year later, Obama said: "I am not asking anyone to take a chance on me. I am asking you to take a chance on your own aspirations."

Mr. Milbank nowhere defines when one qualifies for “lending privileges” and when one doesn’t, a fatal flaw for someone with such finely tuned moral antennae. Nor does he explain why one should add verbal footnotes in speeches, or why if, as is the case with Deval Patrick, that the source of the alleged original is an old friend with whom they have traded ideas and language and who serves in a prominent role as co-chair of Mr. Obama’s campaign, that the issue should matter.

Judge Posner went to the trouble Mr. Milbank didn’t, trying to figure out what plagiarism is. His book is so short and small (in size) that Mr. Milbank might take the time to read it before he accuses someone of something he hasn’t taken the trouble to understand. Here
is a link to the book, called appropriately, The Little Book of Plagiarism. Judge Posner notes an important point nowhere to be found in Mr. Milbank’s article, namely that plagiarism “is not a mere failure to acknowledge copying. Often copying is not acknowledged because it is known to the intended readership,” (pp. 17-18). This was also Thomas DeQuincey’s view when he raised accusations against Coleridge in 1834 in Tait’s Magazine , and DeQuincey was very quick to accuse others of plagiarism. In the context of this particular political campaign, where campaign events are widely broadcast, filmed and up on YouTube, where speeches are reported on daily, where words are seized on by rivals, where there has so far been 18 televised debates among the Democrats, Mr. Obama’s audience knew well where the language was from, just as listeners understood very well yesterday whose remarks John McCain’s wife was referring to. Mr. Obama’s remarks fail to constitute plagiarism on even this first requirement.

Judge Posner goes on to say that “A judgment of plagiarism requires that the copying besides being deceitful in the sense of misleading the intended readers, induce reliance by them.” (page 19). “The reader has to care about being deceived about authorial identity in order for the deceit to cross the line to fraud and thus constitute plagiarism.” (page 20). Certainly Mr. Patrick had no such concerns, and was there any one else that might have, that might, as Judge Posner also argues, have induced them to rely any unattributed statements to vote for Mr. Obama? Hardly. Judge Posner interesting gives the example of the ghostwriter of Hillary Clinton’s “It Takes a Village,” who Judge Posner states, was contractually forbidden to disclose her role. Judge Posner rightly adds, “Yet one cannot imagine the public caring.” (page 25). The same applies to Mr. Obama's remarks.

It is well to remember that the Clinton administration’s triangulation strategy was based on taking (notice I didn’t say stealing or plagiarizing) Republican issues and making them the Administration’s. Both Senator Clinton and Senator Obama’s health care plans are based largely on a plan by a Yale professor. Borrowing successful strategies, plans, lines, and language is part and parcel of politics. What should be uncommon is an effort to demonize any candidate over such things. It is regrettably not surprising that mainstream media willingly play the role of echo chamber for such efforts. As Judge Posner notes, “there is no legal wrong named plagiarism,” (page 34.) There is, though, plenty wrong in the reckless accusations of it.

13 comments:

Hank Ford said...

Irrespective of whether something can be called plagiarism or copyright infringement I think what is more important is that Obama is taking good ideas, good statements, and using them, building on them. Possibly there is no use of words more important than use in political speech, and the quality which is most important is the end result. True that end result would suffer if everything a candidate said was a rote copy from other sources. But if they are weaved together well then there is a kind of mastery worthy of recognizing in itself - Obama a remix master.

Kevin Lemley said...

Hank really nailed this one. The whole point of copyright is to get new ideas out there for others to build upon and expand. Mr. Milbank's view of "plagiarism" promotes the opposite result.

James said...

I think it's different with Obama because he's defined as an orator. Perhaps not self defined, but I don't that's a strange assumption.

If Hillary were a writer--and not a politician (in that she got her support from book buyers as obama gets his support from speech-hearers), surely her use of a silent ghostwriter (who Hillary ended up NOT using at all when writing the book) would be a bigger issue.

William Patry said...

James, aren't you exactly buying into how the Clintons and the press are framing/defining Barack? And while Barack is indeed an orator, his power as an orator comes from many sources: his own life story, the aspirations he has for the country and the aspirations those who hear him have for the country. It is the latter that makes people vote for him, by the way: what we bring to what he says. To claim that somehow his use of a few words hear or there means his message is not authentic, that he is not authentic, or that his listeners are misled is false and a deliberate effort to denigrate everyone, and not just him.

My blog is not political nor is this post meant to be; I do think it true as a general matter that no one is served by such efforts, and moreover that they have backfired badly, beginning in South Carolina: Barack's support has only gotten stronger and deeper across all sectors of voters. Faced with such an inspirational person, it simply won't suffice to bring him down to your level; you have to raise yourself up to his, which some seem not able to do. As Irving Berlin wrote, "Every time you throw dirt on me, you lose a little ground."

Anonymous said...

As freshmen in college, a classmate and I (probably under the influence of too many frostly malt beverages) tried to come up with "air note calls / footnotes" to be used in conjunction with "air quotation marks." Our solution consisted of simulating the rolling down of the carriage of a manual typewriter, typing the footnote, and then returning the carriage to the site of the note call. Somehow, I think that would be lost on everyone under 40. Any suggestions on an air counterpart for the CTRL-ATL-F sequence of Word 2007?

James said...

I didn't mean to bring politics into it, but I suppose I am buying into the same Clinton/press framing of Obama -- though I'd like to think I've formed my own opinion (I can talk about on another blog on another day).

I don't think these accusations would ever win over anyone that was already voting for (inspired by) Obama. Though a chink in the armor of authenticity was reason enough for many not to buy A Million Little Pieces. Was his work not also influenced by his life story, etc.? I think some chose not to read/buy the book because of that--it lost the appeal of authenticity (a basic and incomplete feature of the book as a whole though it may be) which was all it had for them. I don't think that denigrates or reduces anyone, including him.

William Patry said...

Hi James, all my fault! I never thought you were injecting politics into it, I just wanted to make sure others didn't think I was. Your Million Little Pieces riff is a good one. Thanks for commenting and keep sending them in.

James said...

Anon: pointer finger alone extended and lowered quickly. Table tennis players do this when their shot just barely hits the other side of the table. I think that means "i was lucky," but I guess we could interpret it as "i had help from the table," and that'll make the transition to your context easier. It also may look like a "1".

Matt Agnello said...

The Little Book of Plagiarism is a great piece of work and makes some strong arguments about how to look at potential plagiarism. It also made me realize how much plagiarism is a concept deeply rooted in the present and created almost entirely through social context. The article by Milbank just seems like someone attempting to alter social context to give him (or in this case, the person he supports) the greatest benefit.

William Patry said...

Well put Matt. The Washington Post should never be heard to complain abut Fox's political bias; Milbank's article to me was a disgraceful, below the belt, partisan hack job.

William Patry said...

Well, in last night's debate in Austin, Senator Clinton proved once again why she has such high negatives and why she lost ten primaries in a row. In referring to the plagiarism "issue," one that she herself created, she stated in a clearly rehearsed attack, "If your candidacy is going to be about words, then they should be your own words. Lifting whole passages from someone else's speeches is not change you can believe it, it's change you can Xerox."

All campaigns are about ideas expressed in words, and to reverse it as she did was yet another below the belt ad hominem attack, a practice that has been one of the defining characteristics of her campaign. Nor is the attack accurate: there weren't whole passages "lifted" (read "stolen"); the effort to work the very different "change" concept in is terribly strained, and the reference to Xeroxing is something no doubt raised the hairs on the back of Xerox's trademark lawyers. Moreover, did she write that passage herself, or was it the words of someone she paid to write them?

William Patry said...

Some have commented that they found moving Senator Clinton's remarks in last night's Austin debate about the hits she has taken being unimportant compared to those the country has taken. Turns out these remarks were "Xeroxed" from a speech Bill Clinton gave during his 1992 campaign. Here is a side by side of the two:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oJ7Cs3QvT3U

William Patry said...

Continuing the side by side videos of Senator Clinton's use of others' material in her closing last night in the Austin, here is a side by side of her use of a John Edwards speech. That she would use two other people's speeches (and without the attribution that seems so important to her) should not be noteworthy in my opinion, but when she did so while simultaneously attacking Senator Obama for doing the same thing, smacks not just of hypocrisy but also raises the question of her judgment and the level of intelligence with which she holds all of us.

Here is the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zAYItnI-lPo